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Aug 16, 2005 18:10:02 GMT -5
Post by Fafmimbaki on Aug 16, 2005 18:10:02 GMT -5
I missed it... it WAS at the bottom of the page though....
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Aug 16, 2005 18:46:53 GMT -5
Post by Frodo on Aug 16, 2005 18:46:53 GMT -5
Thank you thank you for feed back - yeah, the rhythem was a little off and I couldn't quite figure out where. It shall be altered to flow a little better and the finished product can be seen on my blog when I am not so exhausted. Its second day of school and I already have lots of homework. *sigh* But thanks. I appreciate everything.
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Aug 16, 2005 19:02:18 GMT -5
Post by Fafmimbaki on Aug 16, 2005 19:02:18 GMT -5
Awww! Poor Maddie! Evil homework!
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Aug 17, 2005 21:58:28 GMT -5
Post by Locked Out on Aug 17, 2005 21:58:28 GMT -5
Yeah, poor Madzid. Hey, um, is it okay if I post a poem on here? Or are we still doing feedback? Just wondering. Not in any hurry.
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Aug 18, 2005 17:09:33 GMT -5
Post by Fafmimbaki on Aug 18, 2005 17:09:33 GMT -5
Well, you gotta be quick!
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Aug 18, 2005 17:11:22 GMT -5
Post by Fafmimbaki on Aug 18, 2005 17:11:22 GMT -5
Silently cackle the long awaited bells In rhythem swing they Dreadfully moan the silent dead long waiting As the dirt 'round thier graves sweeps away Triumphantly blow the sacred horns For now has come their day
(c) to me.
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Aug 18, 2005 17:13:47 GMT -5
Post by Fafmimbaki on Aug 18, 2005 17:13:47 GMT -5
because I beat you! HAHAHAHAHA!! You really only need to wait for a couple of people to post and say what they have to say. Once the thread has sat for a day or two, it's probably time for something new!
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Aug 18, 2005 17:14:38 GMT -5
Post by Fafmimbaki on Aug 18, 2005 17:14:38 GMT -5
A change in subject is deffinetly a cue, just to let you know! *wink*
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Aug 18, 2005 21:04:02 GMT -5
Post by Locked Out on Aug 18, 2005 21:04:02 GMT -5
LOL I deserved that. Nice pome bit there, but it took me awhile to make sense of it. Though I'm not sure if that was due to the way it was written or the way my mind works... Anyhow, it's good, if a bit jumbled. *sighs* I can't post anything of mine at the moment, even if the subject needs to be changed. I'm on the wrong computer.
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Aug 19, 2005 16:21:15 GMT -5
Post by Frodo on Aug 19, 2005 16:21:15 GMT -5
wow, what a weird little piece . . . You know what? It sounds like something that was written in Olde English that has been translated. It has the beat and feel to it. Not that its poor modern english or anything (Jo would have jumped on you if there was a problem) its just that, you read it, and you can't quite make heads or tails of it, so you read it again, and it makes sense. or at least, that's how I read translated scripts. (We're reading the Iliad in English, so I'm getting used to it, though)
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Aug 20, 2005 16:40:49 GMT -5
Post by Locked Out on Aug 20, 2005 16:40:49 GMT -5
I'm changing the subject now. By being pointless. I'm not going to ever post poetry on here, because- sorry- I'm paranoid, and don't have official copyright.
It's very rainy here. For the past week or so. Yep. So. How is everybody? Lovely weather.
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Aug 20, 2005 17:45:26 GMT -5
Post by Fafmimbaki on Aug 20, 2005 17:45:26 GMT -5
Once you have written something that is origional, it is copyright to you. That's the law! All you have to do is say, copyright to me, and it's done. If someone steals it, then they broke the law and you can sue them.
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Aug 20, 2005 17:46:27 GMT -5
Post by Fafmimbaki on Aug 20, 2005 17:46:27 GMT -5
So it might be a good idea for us to say that at the bottom of our poems and story ideas when we post them, just for safety's sake.
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Aug 20, 2005 18:45:25 GMT -5
Post by Locked Out on Aug 20, 2005 18:45:25 GMT -5
Well, that shows how little I know. Thanks for the info, Faf. Okee-dokee. Now that I'm not worried about that...
I feel stupid. Getting all worried, and wondering if it was polite to post. Mom raised me too well...*sends unseen glare out the bedroom door, down the hall, down the stairs, to her mother* Sorry for being such a blonde.
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Aug 22, 2005 18:44:57 GMT -5
Post by Frodo on Aug 22, 2005 18:44:57 GMT -5
*coughs quietly*
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